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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table displays the data about the
number
 of
employer
Change to a plural noun
employers
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 who migrate
Temporary
Change the word
temporarily
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 in four countries Australia, New
Zealand
, United Kingdom, and United States in
two
Correct determiner usage
the
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 years 2003 and 2006.
As well
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Also
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,
this
 graph
provides how
Verb problem
shows
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 many
Numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
Number
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 of these
workers
 per 1000 people in 2006 in all countries.
overall
Capitalize word
Overall
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, the
Numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
Number
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 of these
workers
 increased gradually in these countries from the years 2003 to 2006.
Additionally
, the United States
has
Wrong verb form
had
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 the highest
number
 in both years,
whereas
 New
Zealand
 had the lowest
number
 of
employer
Fix the agreement mistake
employers
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. The
number
 of
workers
 in the United States started at 577 in 2003,
then
 went up to 678.A similar amount of increase
observed
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was observed
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 in the
number
 of Australia's
workers
, and the United Kingdom's
workers
,around 100
workers
 in 2003,arrived at Just above 200
workers
 in 2006,
By contrast
, New
Zealand
 had the
fewest
Correct your spelling
lowest
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number
 of
workers
 being at 65 in 2003 and grow up by 20% in 2006. Regarding
to
Remove the preposition
apply
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number
 per 1000 people, the order of
workers
 from the highest to lowest namely
United
Correct article usage
the United
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state
Fix the agreement mistake
States
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,Australia,
United
Correct article usage
the United
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 Kingdom and New
Zealand
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, zealand, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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