The pie chart shows the minutes spent per day on leisure activities in the UK in 1961. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart shows the time spent on various hobbies in the UK over six decades ago.
In 1961,
people
in the UK mostly watched television or listened to the radio in their leisure time. On average they spent almost half their free time on these activities. After that came other unspecified pastimes, which took up about an hour and a quarter a Use synonyms
day
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People
did not seem to socialise a great deal, as Use synonyms
this
accounted for only 35 minutes in a typical Linking Words
day
. Use synonyms
People
ate out, went to the cinema or entertained themselves in other ways outside the home for an average of 28 minutes a Use synonyms
day
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
people
played sports or walked for an average of only 9 minutes a Use synonyms
day
.Use synonyms
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