The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The pie charts
give
the proportion of Verb problem
show
water
utilised in
various purposes Change preposition
for
such
as industrial use
, agricultural use
, and domestic use
in six areas of the world - North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
.
Overall
, 4 areas - South America
, South East Asia
, Central Asia
, and Africa witness the highest amount of water
expenditure on agricultural sectors
. While
,
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America
spend the most water
on industrial sectors
. Furthermore
, all areas spend least
on domestic Correct article usage
the least
use
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to other Correct your spelling
compare
compared
sectors
.
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be
,
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apply
America
,
and Remove the comma
apply
Europes
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Europe
use
water
on
industry Change preposition
in
approximately
53%, and Change preposition
at approximately
then
around 39% is used in agriculture. Further
, 13% of water
usage in North America
, and 15% of water
in Europe have
used in domestic Verb problem
is
sectors
.
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other
America
, South East Asia
, Africa, and Central Asia
are
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significant
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significantly
water
on
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in
agricultural
sector, at 71%, 81%, 84%, and 88%, respectively. Add an article
the agricultural
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the demestic
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sector
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use
in Replace the word
used
industrial
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the industrial
sectors
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america, asia, sectors with synonyms.
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