The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map above
depicts
shows the potential sites for a school to be built in the Verb problem
apply
town
of Canterbury
.
The center
of Change the spelling
centre
Canterbury
locates
Wrong verb form
is located
the
Change preposition
in the
town
center
of Change the spelling
centre
Canterbury
. The town
center
is the Change the spelling
centre
center
of the residential area with Change the spelling
centre
countryside
being the outmost layer of Add an article
the countryside
Canterbury
. To the north of town
centre, you will find the university. A main Correct article usage
the town
road
connecting Sturry stretching from the northern east
part of Add a hyphen
northern-east
Canterbury
to the town
center
. To the Change the spelling
centre
southern west
part of Replace the word
southwest
Catnerbury
, there is a Correct your spelling
Canterbury
road
to Chartham.
There are two expected site
of the school. The first Fix the agreement mistake
sites
being
the Wrong verb form
is
town
center
near the Change the spelling
centre
road
to Chartham while
the second one being
located just next to the Change the form of the verb
is
road
to sturry
in the countryside area.Change the capitalization
Sturry
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