The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map above
depicts
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shows the potential sites for a school to be built in the
town
of
Canterbury
. The
center
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of
Canterbury
locates
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is located
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the
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in the
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town
center
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centre
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of
Canterbury
. The
town
center
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centre
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is the
center
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centre
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of the residential area with
countryside
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the countryside
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being the outmost layer of
Canterbury
. To the north of
town
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the town
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centre, you will find the university. A main
road
connecting Sturry stretching from the
northern east
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northern-east
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part of
Canterbury
to the
town
center
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centre
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. To the
southern west
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southwest
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part of
Catnerbury
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Canterbury
, there is a
road
to Chartham. There are two expected
site
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sites
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of the school. The first
being
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is
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the
town
center
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centre
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near the
road
to Chartham
while
the second one
being
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is
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located just next to the
road
to
sturry
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Sturry
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in the countryside area.
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  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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