The charts show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts describe the proportion
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of unhealty
unhealty
food Correct your spelling
unhealthy
in
three different nutrients if it Change preposition
with
are
consumed too much.
The most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that Change the verb form
is
dinner
has the highest portion in three types nutrients
than others Change preposition
of nutrients
while
breakfast
has the lowest percentage of all nutrition consumptions.
Looking at the details, dinner
and lunch are eating time which have
the biggest percentage of typical meals which consists of sodium at 43% and 29% and saturated fat at 37% and 26% respectively. Change the verb form
has
While
breakfast
and snacks consumptions
are not as large as Fix the agreement mistake
snack consumption
than
lunch and Change preposition
apply
dinner
portion
. Where the number of sodium in Fix the agreement mistake
portions
breakfast
and snacks are same about 14%.
On the other hand
, snacks dominates
sugar nutrient
Which achieves almost Change the verb form
dominate
a
half and the second Correct article usage
apply
high
sugar consumption is Correct word choice
highest
dinner
which has
23%. Verb problem
is
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
breakfast
and lunch contain less sugar
Just under 20% .Submitted by k a l l a on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, breakfast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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