The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energuy use within each nation.
The line graph shows the
oil
usage
in four different countries – Iceland, Sweden
, Italy, and Turkey – as a percentage of total energy use from 1966 to 2006.
One notable observation is that the proportion of the
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oil
usage
in Iceland remained the highest throughout the entire period
, accounting for around 90%. One exception was in 2006,
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this
period
, Turkey was the lowest country whose percentage of oil
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at the end
of the period
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It is also
easy to notice that both Sweden
and Italy dewindled
sharply at the same time. Correct your spelling
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Sweden
, which had 80% of oil
usage
in 1966 fell by half in 2006, and Italy even decreased from 70% in 1996 to 20% in 2006, falling by 3 times compared to the starting period
.
Overall
, the line graph clearly shows that both Iceland and Sweden
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