You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart elucidates the amount of money that
had been
used Wrong verb form
was
on
three Change preposition
in
categories
by different age
groups of citizens in the UK in 2004.
As can be seen from the chart, the figure for food and drink consumption increased moderately from the lowest age
group
which was below 30 years
old to the highest age
association which was above 76 years
old. On the other hand
,the other two categories
witnessed a fluctuation of
citizens' expenditure.
Change preposition
in
Moreover
, the proportion of expenditure on the
food and drink grew from 6 Correct article usage
apply
percentage
in the youngest Replace the word
per cent
age
group
to over 23 percent
in the oldest Change the spelling
per cent
age
class
. Nevertheless
, the percentage of total spending on entertainment saw an uprising from the under 30 years
old categories
to the 61-75 years
old class
which was
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
shared the same highest point in total
Add an article
a total
of
value that was spent in three kinds of Change preposition
apply
categories
, then
experienced a significant drop to 13 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
given class
. Last
but not least, the proportion of restaurant and hotel investment dropped slightly from 14 percent
in the first Change the spelling
per cent
group
then
stayed unchanged in the next two groups at 12 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
saw a sharply
decline to its lowest point at 2 Change the adverb
sharp
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
grew to the same percentage of the first group
in the last
given class
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Vocabulary: Replace the words categories, age, group, years, percent, class with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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