The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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I strongly agree with

this

opinion that

people

are copuing the treatments in some

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specific

areas

such

as fashion and using some products

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there are some reasons that

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this

topic namely,

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are keen on being like

super models

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and using

things

that are trends in these days. There are a lot of

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wich

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are sharing new

things

around the world these days. Making videos by

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Instagram, Youtube or Facebook is getting more and more every day

people

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watching these

things

in their every day and

everyone

think

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that these objects are so important and they have to be a copy of the

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vlogger

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life

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acceptable

in modern society

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this

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copying some

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limited

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each other

; Fore example when somebody

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something

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is new in

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Instagram

, everybody

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that should buy it because it is new and

everyone

are

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doing that. These days some products are

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esaier

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easier

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people

buy them

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better

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. These

things

are the same in every culture and

contry

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country

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everyone

buy

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them without any hesitation and there is just one reason

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everyone

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these

stuff and

people

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they

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eachother

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each other

so they buy the same thing to be

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smart

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stuff increased

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it so another products are experience the same way in

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situation. In conclusion,

people

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the same

life

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eachother

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each other

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every place.

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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Lots of place in this world rely on tourism as a main source of income . Do this trend advantages of outweigh disadvantages?

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?