The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first pie chart illustrates
energy
consumption percentage in an average Australian family Correct article usage
the energy
whereas
the second pie chart illustrates the percentage of greenhouse
gas
emitted from those energy
consumption. Overally
, there are 8 Correct your spelling
Overall
category
for both pie charts consisting of heating, refrigerator, cooling, lighting and other appliances.
Heating is the largest Change to a plural noun
categories
energy
usage
in any Australian family comprising of
42% but contributes lesser Change preposition
apply
greenhouse
gas
emission
of 15% when compared to water heating where it contributes Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
almost
equal percentage of Add an article
an almost
energy
usage
and greenhouse
gas
emission
of Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
being
30% and 32% respectively. Unnecessary verb
apply
Although
, refrigerator
only use 7% of Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
energy
but
the Remove the conjunction
apply
emission
of greenhouse
gas
is double
which is at 14%. Wrong verb form
doubled
Similarly
, this
is seen in energy
use in lighting and other appliances in which the greenhouse
gas
emission
percentages are actually double than
the Change preposition
apply
energy
usage
. Howevever
, there is onlyCorrect your spelling
However
1
% Correct article usage
a 1
differences
between Fix the agreement mistake
difference
energy
usage
and greenhouse
gas
emission
in cooling system
.Fix the agreement mistake
systems
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas, usage, emission with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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