The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008
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The bar chart indicates the average of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables separated into three groups including
men
, women and children between the years 2001 to 2008.
Overall
, it is clear to see that the number of women is more than
men
and kids every year.
Also
,
men
and kids always have similar numbers
although
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of
men
who eat fruit and vegetables still have more than children.
To begin
with, the total of females who ate healthy food from 2001 to 2004 is the biggest increase in the time after about 10% growth .
However
, in the years 2005, 2007 and 2008 the amount is
similarly
around 30%. Even though, 2006 is the moment that has a large symbols with approximately close to 40%.
On the other hand
, males and minors in the first four periods have a very different number when compared with
for instance
, in 2001 the quota of males who ate fruits and vegetables was around 16% but just 11% of youth ate it. Despite the fact that
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after 2006 to 2008 it is noticeable to see that the quantity of youth rose
for example
in 2007 both groups have a decimal close to 30%.
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