It is believed that people are suffering from loads of health problems because of consuming too much fast food. Some people hold a thought that education should take responsibility for this phenomenon while others contradict with this opinion Discuss both of them and give your own point of view

It is true that, these days people suffer many

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problems

due to

fast

foods

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food

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. Some

community

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communities

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say that

this

is an

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liability

while

others believe

this

is not an

education

burden.

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essay will discuss ll both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, eating

junk

foods

frequently can create many diseases, and

education

sectors should take

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responsibility to diminish

this

adverse phenomenon. Schools should teach

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healthy

foods

to their students and the administration

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to be

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coupled with

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moniter

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monitor

to student's lunch

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whether they eat healthy

foods

or not, and

as a result

, they force to their parents cook healthy

meals

at home.

For example

,

education

changes

to

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learner's

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learners'

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food

habit

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from fast foodstuff to healthy, not only

they

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eat healthy

meals

but

also

they have to change

this

society by ignoring

junk

foods

.

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,

education

plays a key role

of

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reducing the level of fast

foods

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consumption.

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,

this

is not

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educational burden because

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purely

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choice

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they eat or not.

education

leads to the correct path

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learners,

besides

whether eat or not is

for

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their personal decisions

coupled with

preferences.

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means many affluent society persons eat more

junk

meals

because

of

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they have neither interest

of

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cooking at home nor time, so

this

is

also

based on the population's income and

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status

than studies.

For instance

, fast food's cost is cheaper than healthy

meals

, so, many youngsters prefer to consume unhealthy foodstuff even

they

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though they

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are educated and they know very well about the consequences.

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, it's purely

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individual's

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decisions

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and

choices

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. In conclusion,

although

education

motivates learners

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healthy

foods

instead

of unhealthy, and it

start

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from schools,

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preferences and choices are the primary liable

eating

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for eating

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fast

foods

.

However

, in my opinion, about

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this

,

education

can alter

this

society from eating

Junk

foods

to healthy

meals

and it is more liability to reduce

this

phenomenon.