The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
The two diagrams
compares
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the amount of people in Japan, from 1950 to 2055.
Overall
, during
this
one century
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period, in 2005 remained the biggest indicator with 127.8 million population, with all other
years
spending much less on them. In 1950 was the lowest index with 84.1 million,
while
after till 2005 the birth rate
was increase
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was increased
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,
however
after, to 2055
dersease
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decreased
. population is 89.9 million. The gap between 1950 to 2015 in natality had widened and considerably more childbirth was in 2005 than in other
years
. As can be seen from the second graph, the amount of adults
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more
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are
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or
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older or
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over 65
years
getting bigger every year and to 2055
years
who
aged
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are aged
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65
years
compares
41.0
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%, in Japan would be the half of
country
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the country
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with old people.
Population
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The population
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did not stay on the same line and showed different indicators in all the time period but rose
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dramatically from 1950 to 1990. The period between 1950 and 2055 saw a sharp growth.
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