The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
The two diagrams
compares
the amount of people in Japan, from 1950 to 2055.
Change the verb form
compare
Overall
, during this
one century
period, in 2005 remained the biggest indicator with 127.8 million population, with all other Add a hyphen
one-century
years
spending much less on them.
In 1950 was the lowest index with 84.1 million, while
after till 2005 the birth rate was increase
, Change the verb form
was increased
was increasing
however
after, to 2055 dersease
. population is 89.9 million. The gap between 1950 to 2015 in natality had widened and considerably more childbirth was in 2005 than in other Correct your spelling
decreased
years
.
As can be seen from the second graph, the amount of adults whose
Correct pronoun usage
who
more
Correct your spelling
are
or
over 65 Correct word choice
older or
years
getting bigger every year and to 2055 years
who aged
65 Add a missing verb
are aged
years
compares 41.0
%, in Japan would be the half of Change preposition
to 41.0
country
with old people. Correct article usage
the country
Population
did not stay on the same line and showed different indicators in all the time period but rose Add an article
The population
the
dramatically from 1950 to 1990. The period between 1950 and 2055 saw a sharp growth.Correct article usage
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