The line graph provides us with information about number of books that were rented from various libraries from june to september 2014 while the pie chart presents percentage of borrowed books' genre.
The line chart illustrates how many books were rented from different four libraries
between
4 months in 2014. Change preposition
over
Overall
, it can be seen that the popularity of all book markets increased over time, with the notable exception of Ryeslip.
The number of books bought from West Eaton and Church Mount stood at the same level of 50 at the beginning of the period. Subsequently
, first
library saw a significant rise of 30% in August and after that peaked at 150 Change the article
the first
at the end
of the time, while
the second went up to the
equal number in September, despite past fluctuations.
Regarding other libraries, Ryeslip was the most popular at the start, but witnessed a dramatic fall to just over 150 and lost 50% of customers. Correct article usage
an
In contrast
, the number of rented books went up in Sutton Wood, after sharp
drop by more Correct article usage
a sharp
that
50 per cent in August.Correct word choice
than
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