The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Honey
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comes from
nectar
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, which is a sweet liquid produced by flowers to attract pollinating insects.
Nectar
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consists of 70 to 80
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water with a mixture of three different sugars, namely sucrose, glucose and fructose.
Nectar
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also
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contains several aroma chemicals to help attract
bees
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to the flowers *
Honey
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bees
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suck and store
nectar
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Honey
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bees
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suck
nectar
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through their hollow proboscis and store it in the first chamber of their stomach. *
Honey
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bees
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return to the nest.
Bees
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can carry up to half their body weight in
nectar
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Apart from
nectar
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,
bees
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need pollen from plants as a source of protein and water for the needs of colony members * The
honey
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harvest season is approximately three months and depends on the flower season. The longer the
honey
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harvest interval, the older the
honey
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produced. “The harvest depends on the flower season, usually three months apart
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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