The best way that a government can reduce the traffic congestion in cities is to provide public transport free of cost to people 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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metropolitan cities like Delhi and Mumbai have been suffering from

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congestion for 2-3 days. To solve these turbulences,government should foster public transportation by spreading awareness towards

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and it is the cheapest from others.

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comfort transportation services.

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by providing free services to travel in the local areas of cities.

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coherence cohesion

Work on improving sentence structure and grammar to enhance clarity. For example, 'traffic congestions have been proliferating significantly' could be rephrased to 'traffic congestion has significantly increased.'

task achievement

Provide more detailed and specific examples to strengthen your argument. For instance, include data or studies that show the impact of free public transportation on reducing traffic congestion.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea, and make use of transitional phrases to improve the flow of your essay. For instance, use phrases like 'In addition,' 'Furthermore,' and 'On the other hand.'

task achievement

The essay clearly presents a stance on the issue and supports it with reasons and examples.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion effectively frame the essay, making it clear what the argument is and summarizing the key points.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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259 words

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