The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives
the
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information about the
value
of a country's export goods in different types of merchandise from 2015 to 2016. And the table illustrates the changes in the proportion of commodity exports in 2016, compared to 2015.
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the beginning, we can see that the
value
of petroleum products always maintained the most export
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, exceeding 60 billion.
Subsequently
, the
value
of
textile
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occupied
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figure in 2015, but it shared the least amount with agricultural products in 2016. At the same time, there was a small decline in the
value
of gems and jewellery, but the figure was over 40 billion all
this
period. During the picture, we can witness that the change in values of
textile
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increased rapidly,
whereas
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rate. And most of the categories rose in
this
period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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