The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show the village Bunborough in the present day and

also

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plans for the village in 2024.

Overall

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we can see that the village might change a lot in the

future

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and there will be some new developments

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transport and

accomodation

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accommodation

. The road will be extended in the

future

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. If you come from Lynwich

then

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you could turn right and you would go to the beach. The road

then

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turn

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turns

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left over

river

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the river

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and

will be joined

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joins

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the

present day

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present-day

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road.

Also

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for

the

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apply

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transport

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transport,

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there

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are

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plans for

railway

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the railway

a railway

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. The railway will have a station next to a river outside Bunborough.

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, in 2024 the fishing port will turn to a promenade along the front of town.

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Finally

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Finally,

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two hotels are going to be put in the

future

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town, one of them near the beach and one of them near the promenade. The shops will remain in the same place in the

future

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and only small differences will exist in housing.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words future with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

164 words

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Significant
Conversion
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