The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the village Bunborough in the present day and
also
plans for the village in 2024.
Overall
we can see that the village might change a lot in the
future
and there will be some new developments
to
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in
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transport and
accomodation
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accommodation
. The road will be extended in the
future
. If you come from Lynwich
then
you could turn right and you would go to the beach. The road
then
turn
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left over
river
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the river
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and
will be joined
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joins
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the
present day
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present-day
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road.
Also
for
the
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apply
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transport
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transport,
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there
is
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are
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plans for
railway
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the railway
a railway
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. The railway will have a station next to a river outside Bunborough.
Furthermore
, in 2024 the fishing port will turn to a promenade along the front of town. 
Finally
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Finally,
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two hotels are going to be put in the
future
town, one of them near the beach and one of them near the promenade. The shops will remain in the same place in the
future
and only small differences will exist in housing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words future with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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