The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the village Bunborough in the present day and
also
plans for the village in 2024. Overall
we can see that the village might change a lot in the future
and there will be some new developments to
transport and Change preposition
in
accomodation
.
The road will be extended in the Correct your spelling
accommodation
future
. If you come from Lynwich then
you could turn right and you would go to the beach. The road then
turn
left over Change the verb form
turns
river
and Correct article usage
the river
will be joined
the Wrong verb form
joins
present day
road. Add a hyphen
present-day
Also
for the
Correct article usage
apply
transport
there Add a comma
transport,
is
plans for Change the verb form
are
railway
. The railway will have a station next to a river outside Bunborough. Add an article
the railway
a railway
Furthermore
, in 2024 the fishing port will turn to a promenade along the front of town.
Finally
two hotels are going to be put in the Add a comma
Finally,
future
town, one of them near the beach and one of them near the promenade. The shops will remain in the same place in the future
and only small differences will exist in housing.Submitted by fatimahalsalman215 on
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