Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that w ill be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some groups of individuals who contends that

students

in tertiary education should only

be allows

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to learn

scicence

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science

and

technology

as it

woud

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would

benefit the nation,

however

, there are opposing

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saying that

student

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students

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should

be allows

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to pursue whichver

studies

they like because it will contribute to diversity of society. On the

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hand, the are various reasons for universities to

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courses that will

useful

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in the

future

. In my perspective, courses

such

as medicine, engineering and information

technology

provides

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job opportunities, career progress, better

salary

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and improvement of

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of life of the

students

in the

future

.

Besides

, by forcing people to choose

studies

related to science and

technology

,

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government

governments

can ensure that

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and knowledge

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in

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society can be covered.

Finally

,

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focusing

students

into

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such

courses would

contributing

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to

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economy

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growth, new

invention

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, and greater

future

prosperity.

On the other hand

, in my opinion,

students

should have the

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to pursue any area of

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study

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they want.

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is because

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it will benefit the

soceity

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society

if

students

are passionate about their work.

Besides

, one cannot be sure

that

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which areas of

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study

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would

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be sought after in the

future

. It could be that the employers are seeking

for

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creativity rather than practical and technical skills.

Therefore

, it might as well that

students

pursue art

studies

such

as art, history and philosophy than of

sciend

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science

and

technology

. In conclusion,

although

, studying science and

technological

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technology

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has its own

pro

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but

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I certainly believe that pursuing own passion will create

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more diverse and

stress free

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citizens and more happier society.