The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The following circle graph
explain
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the
preportions
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proportions
proportion
of both
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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who have been arrested in the five years ending 1994 .
On the other hand
, the bar graph
explain
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the most reasons for arrest.
Overall
we can see that females were arrested more
then
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males in in the five years ending 1994 and the bar graph
clears
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shows
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that
main
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the main
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reason for their recent arrests was public drinking . To
further
explain let's start at the beginning the first chart shows that 5 years finishing 1994
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "explain" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • arrests
  • percentage
  • trend
  • year-over-year
  • increase/decrease
  • significant
  • comparative analysis
  • prevalent
  • legal implications
  • law enforcement
  • policy-making
  • crime statistics
  • societal impact
  • fluctuations
  • data interpretation
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