Schools have the social responsibility to discourage children from eating junk food. Others think it is the parent's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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due to

the increased prevalence of processed food items among

children

, health has become one of the gravest global concerns.

While

some individuals claim that educational institutes should address

this

problem, others believe that parents should take

the

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responsibility.

Nevertheless

, I firmly am of the view that it is

parent

's primary duty to monitor their

children

's eating

habits

by actively participating in their daily routines.

This

essay explores the reasons supporting why a proportion of society renders the issue as

school's

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responsibilty

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responsibility

and why the remainder reckons

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otherwise

. On the one hand, very often people think that

school's

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should incorporate health education in

students

' syllabus. To explain

this

idea, since teachers play an influential role in

students

'

life

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,

students

tend to learn a lot more in classrooms. Having said that, teachers should,

therefore

, utilise

such

opportunities to educate

students

about the adverse effects of consuming unhealthy food .

For example

, had the learning institutes organise seminars on

weekly

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basis, focusing on ways to abstain from junk food,

students

would begin implementing them, which would ultimately improve their lifestyles.

Hence

, owing to the

educationists

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impactful personalities, they should harness their potential skill in grooming

children

's

habits

.

On the other hand

,

parent's

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are solely in charge of their

children

's lifestyle. To elaborate on

this

, not only are parents aware of their

children

's practices, but

also

are able to observe them throughout the day.

In other words

, it is obvious that

students

spend a larger fraction of their time at home,

due to

which they are under

parent

's surveillance continuously;

consequently

, they are able to interfere

their

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children

whenever they opt to eat junk .

For instance

,

parent

's

involvment

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involvement

and participation in

children

's lives gives them an insight into the position and the

habits

of their

children

, which allows them to reform and reshape their

children

accordingly

.

Thus

,

parent

have

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an

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authority

on

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their

children

's eating

habits

and should be held responsible for them. In conclusion,

although

many people underline the importance of school in promoting

healthy

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diet, others advocate that

parent's

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parents

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provide better nourishment in

this

matter.

Nonetheless

, I believe that

parent

's dedication and continuous presence

is

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of paramount importance that

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and

reinforces

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children

's

habits

. Blended learning can be useful in solving

such

problems as well.