The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2000.

The charts below show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2000.
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The pie charts illustrate the changes in the proportions for how many languages British
students
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at a university in England were able to speak in
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two
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different years (2000-2010).
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, Spanish
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was the most used
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in both years.
While
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the number of
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who could use two languages and German only was the lowest in 2000, in 2010, it was French only, no other
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, and German only. In the case of the Spanish
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, it accounted for 30% in the first year, and it
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climbed by 5% in the second year.
Likewise
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, the number of
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who could speak two languages and another
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language languages
also
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went up by 5%.
On the other hand
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, as for French only, it fell by 5% in the next decade.
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, there was a decline of 10% in the proportion of the number of
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who could speak no other
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.
However
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, when it comes to Germany only, the figure remained the same in both years at 10%.
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