the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The chart displays the
value
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of exports in several categories in one country between 2015 and 2016. The table compares the percentage change in values in each category of exports in 2016 with 2015.
Overall
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it is clear that
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in the chart the petroleum
products
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had the highest
value
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of
export
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earnings
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in both years,
while
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textiles
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had the lowest rate of exporting. From the table, we can deduce that the biggest change is at the level of
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textiles
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materials. Looking at the information in detail, the
export
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earnings
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of
textiles
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in 2015 had the lowest
value
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, approximately 25 billion dollars. In 2016, the number of
earnings
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had soared, reaching the same
value
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as the
export
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earnings
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of agricultural
products
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(32 billion dollars). Moving on to the second table, compared the
value
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of gems and jewellery in 2015, the percentage of
export
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earnings
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of these two
products
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had
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plummeted by 5.18%. The rest of
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products
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the products
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increased their
earnings
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in 2016,
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textiles
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having the biggest percentage of growth and agricultural
products
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had
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the lowest rate, 15.24% and 0.81 respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, export, earnings, textiles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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