the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart displays the
value
of exports in several categories in one country between 2015 and 2016. The table compares the percentage change in values in each category of exports in 2016 with 2015.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in the chart the petroleum Linking Words
products
had the highest Use synonyms
value
of Use synonyms
export
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earnings
in both years, Use synonyms
while
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textiles
had the lowest rate of exporting. From the table, we can deduce that the biggest change is at the level of Use synonyms
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textiles
materials.
Looking at the information in detail, the Fix the agreement mistake
textile
export
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earnings
of Use synonyms
textiles
in 2015 had the lowest Use synonyms
value
, approximately 25 billion dollars. In 2016, the number of Use synonyms
earnings
had soared, reaching the same Use synonyms
value
as the Use synonyms
export
Use synonyms
earnings
of agricultural Use synonyms
products
(32 billion dollars).
Moving on to the second table, compared the Use synonyms
value
of gems and jewellery in 2015, the percentage of Use synonyms
export
Use synonyms
earnings
of these two Use synonyms
products
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had
plummeted by 5.18%. The rest of Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
products
increased their Correct article usage
the products
earnings
in 2016, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
textiles
having the biggest percentage of growth and agricultural Change preposition
with textiles
products
Use synonyms
had
the lowest rate, 15.24% and 0.81 respectively.Wrong verb form
having
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, export, earnings, textiles with synonyms.
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