The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information  by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram shows a part of the town of Norbiton before and ideas to improve the place soon.
Overall
, the area will not have any factories that will reduce the pollution. It will be replaced
instead
with houses and buildings where the residents can enjoy their time there. Since more people will live in the town, there will be more pathways that will lead to different areas
unlike
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the present. Now, people can pass the river using a bridge. In comparison to the town now, it will have more buildings for entertainment like shops and playgrounds, and
school
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for education.
However
, the available land will be lower as more of it is covered.
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