The charts below the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar
chart
compares
males
and
females
in terms of the proportion of their favourite
film
types, and
pie
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the pie
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chart
highlights the percentages of income from general
ticket
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tickets
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.
Overall
,
action
movies were the most liked by
men
,
whereas
women liked romantic
comedy
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comedies
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most. Meanwhile,
action
films generated the majority of income. Regarding the figure for
males
' and
females
' favourite genres of
film
, 40% of
men
preferred
action
movies, making it the highest number in the
chart
,
while
one in four women liked
this
genre.
However
, Romantic
comedy
was the number-one type of
film
for
females
with 30%, which was 6 times as high as the proportion of
Men
who watched
such
genre. As regards the proportion of
comedy
and western, twice as many
males
and
females
enjoyed watching the former as the letter, at 20% and 10%
accordingly
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. Thriller was ranked third for
men
with 15%, 5% higher than that of the opposite gender,
whereas
the percentage of
males
liking science fiction was twice as high as that of
females
who liked the same type of
film
.
According to
the pie
chart
, almost half of
takings
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the takings
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came from selling
ticket
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tickets
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for
action
movies. Next came
comedy
with 24%, making it twice as high as the figure for romantic
comedy
. The remaining 15% of income was generated by the sales of tickets for
thriller
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thrillers
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and other types
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