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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts compare the marital status of
people
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 living in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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. It looks at six different spousal relationships. Units are measured in percentages.
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, the proportion of
people
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 that are married but living apart is the highest in
Canada
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while
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 for
Australia
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, the highest share is for married couples. Despite
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, both countries have
lower
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 percentage of divorced
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. In
Canada
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, more than half of the population are separated but not legally divorced.
This
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figure
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 is slightly more than
Australia
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 where the number of
people
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 that are living apart but have not signed the ink stands at 41%. Married couples take the second highest share, and
this
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figure
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 is 29%. Noticeably, the proportion of
people
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 who have never been married or have been widowed
are
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 similar which is 7%. The same can
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 be said for
Australia
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 where the
figure
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 stands at 5% and 6% respectively. In
Australia
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, more
people
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 have tied the knot than divorced. Nearly half of
people
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 are married compared to less than 5% who are legally separated. Interestingly, both
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 have
low
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a low
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 percentage of divorced
people
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 with the
figure
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 standing at 1% and 2% respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, canada, australia, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
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