The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The diagram illustrates the process of
rainwater
Use synonyms
stored in storage tanks
then
Linking Words
filtered with chemical reactions and supplied drinking
water
Use synonyms
to consumers in Australia’s cities.
Overall
Linking Words
, the
rainwater
Use synonyms
is collected from the roofs of the houses and sent into the tanks, after some chemical treatments and filtration processes, so it can become drinkable and transported to the houses. It is conspicuous that the
rainwater
Use synonyms
is collected through the drainage system from the house’s roofs and other buildings, where it is filtered in a
water
Use synonyms
filter tank and
then
Linking Words
sent to the big storage ponds that are specially designed for storage purposes.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, the
rainwater
Use synonyms
moved from ponds to the
water
Use synonyms
treatment plants with the help of big pipes.
Further
Linking Words
, it is treated with different chemicals making it drinkable for everyone. Probing ahead, after completion of the
water
Use synonyms
treatment process
then
Linking Words
it is transported through the underground conduits and sent to the different premises for use.
Additionally
Linking Words
, the population use it for different purposes including drinking, bathing and cleaning.
In addition
Linking Words
, it reaches consumers' houses and again
this
Linking Words
natural process starts after rain comes and vice versa.
Submitted by rbtech65 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words rainwater, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: