The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.

The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.
The chart displays a comparison between British people's consumption of five or more fruit and
vegetables
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portions in their daily meals.
Overall
,
women
seem to have the greatest amount of consumption throughout the period.
While
men
and
children
are having an increase. At the beginning of the period, in 2001
women
were leading by having a consumption rate of 23 per
cent
,
whereas
men
were almost 5 per
cent
ander them and the
children
accumulated 13 per
cent
. Over the next 2 years, the trend did not seem to change with both
men
and
children
being stable for the third
year
in a row, yet
women
increased by almost 2 per
cent
in the following
year
and 3 per
cent
the
year
after. Since 2004 the numbers started to increase for both
children
and
men
after being stable.
Whereas
in 2006, both
women
and
men
reached their highest peaks with 35 and almost 28 per
cent
respectively.
However
, the
children
's peak was in the
year
after with over 27 per
cent
. The numbers fell after the peaks seen in 2008.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • portion
  • consumption
  • gender
  • age group
  • percentage
  • daily meals
  • recommendation
  • trend
  • health impact
  • government intervention
  • increase
  • decrease
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