The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.
The chart displays a comparison between British people's consumption of five or more fruit and
vegetables
portions in their daily meals. Change the noun form
vegetable
Overall
, women
seem to have the greatest amount of consumption throughout the period. While
men
and children
are having an increase.
At the beginning of the period, in 2001 women
were leading by having a consumption rate of 23 per cent
, whereas
men
were almost 5 per cent
ander them and the children
accumulated 13 per cent
. Over the next 2 years, the trend did not seem to change with both men
and children
being stable for the third year
in a row, yet women
increased by almost 2 per cent
in the following year
and 3 per cent
the year
after.
Since 2004 the numbers started to increase for both children
and men
after being stable. Whereas
in 2006, both women
and men
reached their highest peaks with 35 and almost 28 per cent
respectively. However
, the children
's peak was in the year
after with over 27 per cent
. The numbers fell after the peaks seen in 2008.Submitted by hamdanaldehaihani37 on
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