The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.

The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.
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The chart displays a comparison between British people's consumption of five or more fruit and
vegetables
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portions in their daily meals.
Overall
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,
women
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seem to have the greatest amount of consumption throughout the period.
While
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men
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and
children
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are having an increase. At the beginning of the period, in 2001
women
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were leading by having a consumption rate of 23 per
cent
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,
whereas
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men
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were almost 5 per
cent
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ander them and the
children
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accumulated 13 per
cent
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. Over the next 2 years, the trend did not seem to change with both
men
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and
children
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being stable for the third
year
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in a row, yet
women
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increased by almost 2 per
cent
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in the following
year
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and 3 per
cent
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the
year
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after. Since 2004 the numbers started to increase for both
children
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and
men
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after being stable.
Whereas
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in 2006, both
women
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and
men
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reached their highest peaks with 35 and almost 28 per
cent
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respectively.
However
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, the
children
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's peak was in the
year
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after with over 27 per
cent
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. The numbers fell after the peaks seen in 2008.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, children, cent, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • portion
  • consumption
  • gender
  • age group
  • percentage
  • daily meals
  • recommendation
  • trend
  • health impact
  • government intervention
  • increase
  • decrease
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