The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.
The bar chart compares the shares of Britain’s population who consume five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised
according to
gender and age between 2001-2008.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the bar chart that, the women were the highest, but the children
were minimal over the given.
According to
the bar chart, in 2007 three different categories were close to one another. They were children
and men. Totally these groups were above 25 children
. Children
grew up between 2001 and 2008. They started at more than 10 and jumped up to 25.
In addition
, children
and men didn’t have any changes between 2001 and 2003. Kids and mele continued to improve. However
, women had little decline after 2006. Even though females had little creases they were still more than other groups of genders.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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