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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. The two maps show the transformation of Westley town from 1815 to present day.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. The two maps show the transformation of Westley town from 1815 to present day.
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The two maps show the transformation of Westley
town
 from 1815 to
present
Correct article usage
the present
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 day.
Overall
, there were multiple changes to the layout of the
town
 with new businesses, private residencies and a train station being set up. In 1815, there were houses
besides
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beside
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 and around the
town
 hall which is now replaced by businesses and residential areas. Surprisingly, the
town
 hall and market square occupy the same positions as it did in the past.
Moreover
, Lenton Woods
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 was situated west
to
Change preposition
of
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 the lake is replaced by
housing
Add an article
a housing
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 estate. South
to
Change preposition
of
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 Westley
town
, there is a new railway station built which replaced the fields.
Furthermore
, the bridge that was erected over the river was demolished to make way for the newly built railway track. Two new buildings were constructed in the location where Lord Westley’s house used to be situated in 1815.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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