In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? You should write at least 250 words.

I would say there

is

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more benefits when you have to find

work

and move away from your friends and

families

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family

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. I can come up with 2 advantages.

First,

you can form a new relationship with your coworkers and

this

new relationship will be helpful to your

work

life. If you did not move away from your friends and families,

then

you

will

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not feel to be close

with

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your

collegeus

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colleagues

. Because you have people who you already know well,

so

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you will not feel lonely during having a time with them.

Then

naturally, you will not

work

hard

for getting

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along with

your coworkers.

This

phenomenon can cause

a

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loneliness and alienation in your working space.

However

, when you are

seperated

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separated

with

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from

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people who you are already close with, you will definitely try to be friends with coworkers, and after that, it will be

develped

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developed

into enjoying

hobby

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a hobby

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together or making a study group and having a self-developing time together. These activities and

changness

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changes

will make you get easily into

work

life.

Second,

it's your new chance

of growing

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. Once in a life, of

course

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you will face the situation that you need to live far away from your family and

old

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the old

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town where you

live

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for a long time. At

first,

you might

lonely

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be lonely

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or can not stand it that well. But

human

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humans

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can grow when

you

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they

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practice overcoming loneliness and

being

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used to

this

new environment. If you assume that

this

chance

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is going to be your growing point,

then

it will make you stronger. In conclusion, there are more advantages