The table illustrates the cost of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry in the next five years. The pie chart, on the other hand, depicts four sectors allocated in the project in the first year.
The chart describes the funding of three forestry environmental projects over the next five years
while
the pie chart gives information about the expenditure allocated for four sectors in the first year
.
Overall
, the plan for West Africa and Central America experienced a considerable downward trend while
the
Correct article usage
apply
South-east
Asia witnessed a remarkable upward trend over the next five years. Correct your spelling
Southeast
On the other hand
, the expenses of sectors in one year
contributed the most on
salaries and Change preposition
to
similar
percentage Add an article
a similar
on
training and office expenses Change preposition
to
while
second most contribution to set-up costs.
In the first year
, West Africa and Central America accounted for 10.5 million
and 20 million
respectively. After that, the trend gradually dropped in the following years and ended with 3.5 million
in West Africa and 5 million
in Central America in the fifth year
. In contrast
, South-east
Asia Correct your spelling
Southeast
stand
out Wrong verb form
stood
30
Change preposition
at 30
million
at the beginning of the year
and then
decreased slightly to 20 million
in the second year
. Moving next year
, it then
steadily progressed as
40 Change preposition
to
million
and continued to grow to about 50 million
at the end
of fifth
Change the article
the fifth
year
.
In contrary, the expenditure in the first year
notably shared in salaries around 50% and the second most proportion distributed to set-up costs. Finally
, training and office expenses divided
equally as 10% respectively.Add a missing verb
are divided
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