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The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the amin features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the amin features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how many
tons
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 of three different fossil fuels sorts were used in the UK between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the amount of gas,
while
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 the opposite trend was seen in the
figure
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 for oil and coal.
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, the amount of used coal was the highest
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 compared to others, replaced by gas from 2000 onwards. The rate of gas used for intended purposes started at 210
million
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tons
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 in 1990, after which it experienced a significant rise to 300
million
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tons
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 in 2000, before ending the period at 325
million
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 in 2010
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 a marginal climb. Opposite changes could be witnessed through the
figure
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 for coal, which was at 305
million
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tons
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 in 1990 and remained at the top place for the next five years, despite a small downward trend to 275
million
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.
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, from 2000 onwards, because of a remarkable drop, coal became the least common kind of emission resource in the UK, reaching just under 200
million
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 in the final year. Similar changes but with a negligible fluctuation could be seen in the
figure
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 for oil, starting at 225
million
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tons
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 in the first year, followed by a slight decline to 205
million
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 after a decade, and ending the period at just over 200
million
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tons
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 in the
last
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 year because of a significant decrease.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons, figure, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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