The charts below show the proportion of graduates with different qualifications working in one engineering company in 1980 and 2008.
The pie chart compares the percentages of graduates with various degrees employed by a certain engineering company in 1980 and 2008.
Overall
, it is notable that the majority of the graduates hired by one engineering company in the first year were Master
of Science
degree holders
, whereas
, in the second year, most of them were Ph
.D. Science
holders
. Additionally
, it is also
worth mentioning that the only proportion that did not vary was seen in people with Master
of Science
degrees.
Regarding the employees
with different diplomas working for an organization in 1980, master
of science
holders
accounted for 29% of workers, ranking first in that year. Following
this
, the workers with a Ph
.D. in science
made up 25%, while
the figure for employees
with a first degree in art was 17%. Next,
the proportion of graduates with first-degree science
degrees was the lowest (2%). Moreover
, the figure for employees
with Master
of Arts diplomas was 13%.
When it comes to percentages in 2008, the rate of holders
of Ph.D.
in Change the punctuation
PhD
science
rose and reached 30% (the highest rate in the chart). Furthermore
, there was a decline in the figures for first-degree art and first-degree science
workers by 1% and 8%, respectively. In contrast
, that of Ph
.D. science
employees
experienced 5% growth. Lastly
, the rate of Master
of Science
holders
did not see changes throughout the period, although
the proportion of Master
of Arts holders
witnessed a 1% decrease.Submitted by minimix1203 on
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