The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs depict
margarine
, low fat & reduced spreads and butter
as a daily spreads consumption between 1981 to 2007. Overall
, margarine
and butter
suffered a downtrend, whereas
low fat & reduced spreads experienced a noticeable growth but slightly dropped in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
.
In the beginning, many individuals used Add an article
the period
butter
as their spread, started
at 140 Wrong verb form
starting
grams
in 1981. In 1986, butter
had the highest consumption which peaked at 160 grams
daily. However
, butter
usage steadily plummeted in
1991 to 2007 from 100 Change preposition
from
grams
to just under 60 grams
respectively.
In contrast
, low fat & reduced spreads significantly increased from slightly under 20 grams
to 80 grams
in 1996 and 2001 respectively. Then
, it experienced a marginal drop in 2007 which was over 60 grams
. Following that, margarine
consumption fall
by approximately 20 Replace the word
fell
grams
between the period of 1981 to 1986. Margarine
experienced a level off
roughly 80 Replace the word
of
grams
to 100 grams
in
between 1991 to 2001 before Change preposition
apply
suffered
a notable Wrong verb form
suffering
decreased
to just 40 Replace the word
decrease
grams
in 2007.Submitted by debbychrist10 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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