The
parents
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encourage their
children
to use
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leisure time to do a part-time
job
. Personally, I think it is good for
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of the
children
itselfCorrect pronoun usage
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. There are some benefits and drawbacks that
children
can get from
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job
. I will discuss both sides.
On the one side, part-time
jobs
enable
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children
to learn how to survive. Survive
from Change preposition
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the struggles
which Correct pronoun usage
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they are facing
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. They can not always depend on their
parents
for
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money because sometimes not all
familyFix the agreement mistake
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have
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good
conditionFix the agreement mistake
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on finance. By doing part-time
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, the
children
can help the
parents
, at least to fulfill their own needs.
In addition
, when
children
know how hard to get money, they can
more Correct quantifier usage
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appreciate their
parents
who striving for them.
For example
, they can give 5 per cent
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their salary and give it to their
parents
or donate
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forChange preposition
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those who need it.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages when
children
doingWrong verb form
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a part-time
job
.
First,
they do not know how to work. Because of that, they can make mistakes in places
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they do their work. Another problem is the owner of the shop will not want to take responsibility
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their employee just because they are still
children
.
For example
, frequently, the business owner
employChange the verb form
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children
who
stillAdd a missing verb
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underage and when the problems
have Unnecessary verb
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come, the owner
didWrong verb form
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not care at all.
To summarise, when
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parents
want to their kids
doingWrong verb form
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part-time
jobs
, they must
considerateReplace the word
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all of these advantages and disadvantages. By that, they can decide whether
this
part-time
jobsFix the agreement mistake
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worthAdd a missing verb
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it or not. In my opinion, the part-time
jobs
isChange the verb form
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good, in the end.