The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph
display
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displays
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five types of
food
that
consume
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were consumed
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in Australia during six decades from 1950.
Overall
, the
amount
of
food
which was
eatn
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eaten
in 2010 was more than in 1950 for all kinds of
food
except meat, that
mean
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means
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the
amount
food
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of food
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increased with time except
some
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for some
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years .The
vegetables
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vegetable
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consumption was the highest
food
,
while
the seafood consumption was the lowest among all categories.
According to
what is shown,There was a flclouted in the
amount
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number
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of
vegebles
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vegetables
from 120 to 160 during six decades the
amount
of fruit
between
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was between
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80 and 100 kg per person per year from 1950 to 1980, after
that
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that,
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it rose to 140
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per person
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person
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people
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per year in 2010
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • dietary preferences
  • staple foods
  • health awareness
  • rising health concerns
  • shift towards healthier eating habits
  • intake
  • notable trend
  • significant feature
  • consumption
  • reflecting changing
  • availability
  • a decline towards
  • initially increased
  • steady rise
  • marked decrease
  • period of stability
  • dramatically
  • a sharp rise
  • gradual change
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