The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph
display
five types of Change the verb form
displays
food
that Use synonyms
consume
in Australia during six decades from 1950.
Wrong verb form
were consumed
Overall
, the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
food
which was Use synonyms
eatn
in 2010 was more than in 1950 for all kinds of Correct your spelling
eaten
food
except meat, that Use synonyms
mean
the Change the verb form
means
amount
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
food
increased with time except Change preposition
of food
some
years .The Change preposition
for some
vegetables
consumption was the highest Change the noun form
vegetable
food
, Use synonyms
while
the seafood consumption was the lowest among all categories.
Linking Words
According to
what is shown,There was a flclouted in the Linking Words
Use synonyms
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
vegebles
from 120 to 160 during six decades the Correct your spelling
vegetables
amount
of fruit Use synonyms
between
80 and 100 kg per person per year from 1950 to 1980, after Add a missing verb
was between
that
it rose to 140 Add a comma
that,
Change preposition
per person
person
per year in 2010Change to a plural noun
people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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