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The diagram below diplays how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below diplays how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the
using
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 of Uranium to produce nuclear power.
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, the linear process goes through 6 various stages, with some materials and equipment, which starts with mining the Uranium from the earth and ends with burning the remains. First of all, the Uranium
pulled
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 from the land.
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 it’s altered to U-235 fuel pellets.
Then
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 fuel supply generators with electricity.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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