The diagram below diplays how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the
using
of Uranium to produce nuclear power.
Replace the word
use
Overall
, the linear process goes through 6 various stages, with some materials and equipment, which starts with mining the Uranium from the earth and ends with burning the remains.
First of all, the Uranium Linking Words
pulled
from the land. Add a missing verb
was pulled
Thereupon
it’s altered to U-235 fuel pellets. Linking Words
Then
fuel supply generators with electricity.Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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