The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given maps to depict an industrial region in the city of Norbit and its future developed plan of the site
Overall
,
while
some housing will be constructed above, the
river
factories will be replaced with housing and facilities, and both sides of the
river
will be connected through a bridge To commence with, it has been planned to demolish the factories in the south of the
river
, replace them with housing, and extend them to the town.
moreover
, the housing area will Need amenities that have been considered.
for instance
, shops will be located to the left of the square,
while
the medical
center
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centre
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, school, and playground will be constructed to the right of the square
additionally
rose will be added to ease access to the new buildings.
On the other hand
, both parts of the spring will be connected. The Farmland in the north of the
river
will partially be converted to housing.
Consequently
, it will be limited to the left of the new resident area.
Furthermore
, the developed area is going to be linked to the main route with a smaller square.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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