The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts depict three types of
meals
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meal
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nutrients (
sodium
, saturated fat, added
sugar
) which are unhealthy if overly eaten.
Overall
, saturated fat and added
sugar
have
same
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percentage in the breakfast. Following that,
sodium
had the highest
proportion
during lunch.
Sodium
consumption
leads the chart
proportion
during dinner and it had the lowest
proportion
in
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the
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snack time.
In
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the
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breakfast time, most people consume saturated fat and
sugar
with
identical
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percentage
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which was 16%, and
sodium
was in the
last
proportion
with only 14%.
However
,
sodium
consumption
surged 29% during lunch,
while
saturated fat followed closely which was 26%. Added
sugar
stood in the least eaten
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to other nutrients with only 19%. During
the
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dinner,
sodium
had the highest percentage which
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43%,
following
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followed
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with
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saturated fat
37
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% and
lastly
added
sugar
23
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at 23
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%. Snacks
proportion
had the most added
sugar
consumption
which was 42%,
whereas
saturated fat and
sodium
consumption
were only 21% and 14% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, proportion, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • average percentage
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • meal times
  • excessive
  • implications
  • dietary
  • intake
  • macronutrients
  • saturated fats
  • sugars
  • sodium
  • unhealthy
  • proportion
  • variation
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