The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B + ) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the changes in the percentages of
girls
and boys
gaining high grades in 7 different courses.
Overall
, as you can see in the detail, there are results with no significant differences in 4 subjects
such
as physics, history, foreign languages and mathematics. Whereas
, there is the biggest difference in the percentages of girls
and boys
in chemistry, approximately, 16%. It seems girls
have greater performance than boys
in chemistry area.
There are similar results in 2 subjects
: the proportion
of girls
is 47.4% than the proportion
of boys
is 46.8% in foreign languages. And the proportion
of girls
is 49.2% and boys
is 48.4% in mathematics. Girls
had more percentages than boys
in these two subjects
slightly. In contrast
, there are big different results in other 3 subjects
: Firstly
, the proportion
of girls
is 30.3 % than the proportion
of boys
is 14.1% in chemistry. Secondly
, the proportion
of girls
is 20.1% and boys
are 30.4% in geography. Lastly
, the proportion
of girls
is 56.3% and boys
are 42.1% in computer science.
To summarise, girls
appear higher performance than boys
in the most of subjects
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