The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B + ) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B + ) in respective courses.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the changes in the percentages of
girls
and
boys
gaining high grades in 7 different courses.
Overall
, as you can see in the detail, there are results with no significant differences in 4
subjects
such
as physics, history, foreign languages and mathematics.
Whereas
, there is the biggest difference in the percentages of
girls
and
boys
in chemistry, approximately, 16%. It seems
girls
have greater performance than
boys
in chemistry area. There are similar results in 2
subjects
: the
proportion
of
girls
is 47.4% than the
proportion
of
boys
is 46.8% in foreign languages. And the
proportion
of
girls
is 49.2% and
boys
is 48.4% in mathematics.
Girls
had more percentages than
boys
in these two
subjects
slightly.
In contrast
, there are big different results in other 3
subjects
:
Firstly
, the
proportion
of
girls
is 30.3 % than the
proportion
of
boys
is 14.1% in chemistry.
Secondly
, the
proportion
of
girls
is 20.1% and
boys
are 30.4% in geography.
Lastly
, the
proportion
of
girls
is 56.3% and
boys
are 42.1% in computer science. To summarise,
girls
appear higher performance than
boys
in the most of
subjects
.
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