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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the manufacture of primary fuel types in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
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, it is clearly indicated that all three kinds experienced an increase over the entire
period
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, with the exception of coal, which underwent a perceptible decline. The petroleum figure, which stood at approximately 90
units
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 in 1981, rose to 140
units
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 in 1986, before going down to 100
units
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 in 1991. After that, it constantly increased over the rest of the
period
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 and reached 140
units
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 one more time. The figure for coal, which accounted for 80
units
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, underwent a significant decrease and amounted to almost 40
units
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, after being stable for a short
period
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. Before experiencing a decreasing tendency for the whole
period
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, it grew to 60
units
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 in 1986. Natural gas remained stable till 1991, and slightly increased for the rest of the
period
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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