The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards of a hospital . It shows what percentage of the patients replied ' very good ' about various aspects of their hospital experience . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant . .

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who stayed in three different wards of a hospital and what percentage of the

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replied "very good" about various aspects of their hospital

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experience

. In Holly

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,

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always notice hospital

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.Approximately 90% of it held positive views because of the hospital

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and aftercare,significantly higher than those in the other wards.

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time,

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it is the least portation,it still has

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important station,more than 70%

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. In Maple

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,most

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will think about

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quality

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treatment.

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80%.The

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of aftercare

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share the same account,about 70% each one.The

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one in Maple

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is the waiting time,only 50%

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patients

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will think about that. Oak

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followed a similar pattern,but with smaller percentages,with 80%of

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expressing high satisfaction with the

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,around 70%for

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and aftercare,and just above 50%for waiting time. In general,

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in Holly

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and OakWard will concentrate

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