The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the

consumption

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of several types of junk food including

hamburger

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hamburgers

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fish

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chips

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, and

also

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pizza in the UK between 1970 and 1990.

Overall

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, the

consumption

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fish

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chips

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as well as

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hamburger

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hamburgers

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rised

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risen

rose

rise

dramatically from 1980 and 1985, respectively, which made

fish

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chips

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the most popular fast food in 1990.

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While people

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People

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are

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have

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lost interest

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eating pizza, which

became

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has become

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the least popular among junk food. Looking into details, at

first,

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the

consumption

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hambuger

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hamburger

hamburgers

and

fish

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chips

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was around 20 and just under 100

grams

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, respectively.

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, until 1980, its'

consumption

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gradually increased, before the consumed weight of

fish

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chips

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markedly

rised

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rose

approximetly

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approximately

500

grams

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, from 1980 to 1985, hamburgers were less consumed than

fish

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chips

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. From 1985 its

consumption

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significantly went up from just over 100

grams

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to around 300

grams

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in 1990. In terms of pizza, its

consumption

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slowly decreased from 300

grams

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in 1970 to just over 200

grams

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in 1985. After that, it remains steady until 1990.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chips, grams with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "rised" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption
fast food
Britain
decade
trend
increase
decrease
stable
significant
milestones
sharp
popularity
patterns
preferences
correlations
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