Task2 The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Over the

last

few years,population relocation to urban

areas

in favour of finding jobs has become one of the main problems that

people

should pay attention

.

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I will discuss the major reasons behind

this

issue and viable

solution

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. On the one hand, the reason for travelling to the

cities

for work seems to be

queite

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quite

simple, the first driving offices built in larger developed

areas

.

That is

because

people

generally choose to find a place

for

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work in

cities

because of

shortage

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the shortage

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of

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jobs in the village.Another important reason

of

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this

issue

can be

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that

,

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when

young

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generation

leave

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their families in the rural

areas

to excel in big

cities

it creates additional risks for older individuals.

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, many senior citizens stay their home lonely, without their children. They lose necessary support and

puts

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additional pressure on

healthcare

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the healthcare

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system.

On the other hand

,despite the fact that the migration from rural

areas

to

cities

has gained momentum is

serious

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problem there are some reliable

solution

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to it. The first viable solution to

this

problem is

that

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increase the number of factories and companies in rural

areas

and help

people

improve their living conditions by providing them with work.

For instance

, the more opportunities are provided in the villages the less amount of

people

who come from the

countyside

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countryside

will be.Another significant way by which

this

problem can be tackled is that local authorities should support the growth of tourist attractions in the village.The main reason for

this

fast-growing tourists can drive the local economy and expand the labour market to meet tourist demand. In a nutshell,

government

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should increase job scope and allure

people

to travel to a town,in

this

situation

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the authority's action plays a crucial role

to address

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in addressing

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this difficulties

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.