The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart above shows information about the most usual

sports

played in 2002 in New Zealand.

In addition

, there is

also

a comparison between

boys

and

girls

which

sports

they like.

Overall

, in cricket and netball, it was

showns

Correct your spelling

shown

that the interest of the

boys

and

girls

sports

is totally different. In cricket, the total

percent

Replace the word

percentage

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the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

boys

just only 1 per

cent

. Meanwhile,

girls

really often play

this

game for 12 per

cent

Besides

, the differentiation of percentage for the

girls

and the

boys

who do athletics

just

Add a missing verb

is just

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around 2 per

cent

Percentation

Correct your spelling

Presentation

of basketball and tennis have

same

Change the article

the same

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charateristic

Correct your spelling

characteristic

characteristics

as athletics. There are big gaps in several

sports

Change preposition

apply

show examples

martial arts, netball, soccer, swimming, and unknown

sports

. The gap can reach more than 10 per

cent

Also

, it is important to

notes

Wrong verb form

note

show examples

that the

percentation

Correct your spelling

presentation

is not until 100 per

cent

but just at 30 per

cent

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, boys, girls, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

153 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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