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The bar chart illuistrats the percentage deviation of internatinal students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.

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The bar chart
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illustrates
illuistrats
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illustrates
 the
percentage
 deviation of
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international
internatinal
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international
 students among
university
 graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, we can see that the
percentage
 of the share of international students considerably
incresed
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increased
 in the period of 2001-2006. It can be plainly viewed that
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New Brunswick
university
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 has shown the
higest
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highest
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whereas
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Ontario
university
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 has the lowest
percentage
 over the course of these 5 years. We can
also
notic
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note
 that the highest
percentage
 after New Brunswick was Nova Scotia with about 11%
besides
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that it has
same
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with
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 British Columbia
university
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. Data
also
 suggest that the
higest
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highest
 growth rate
university
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 was
British
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 Columbia (about 6%)
however
, the lowest growth rate
educational
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 institution was
Quebec
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 (which is only about 2%.). There are identical
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 for
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Manitoba
 and (Newfoundland and
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Labrador
)
univeraities
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universities
 which is 3%.
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