The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate

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illustrates

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a variety of

sports

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popularity

degree

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degrees

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diffirent

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different

gender

playd

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played

in New

zealand

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Zealand

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in 2002.

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boys

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and

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grils

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girls

have

significant

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significantly

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different interests in the types of

sports

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they play. The most popular

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sports

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sport

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among

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grils

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girls

netball

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then

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followed by

the

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apply

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swimming is in

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higher proportion than other kinds of

sports

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. The highest

percentag

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percentage

boys

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choose to play soccer,

whereas

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they

shows

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show

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apply

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little

interests

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interest

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neball

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netball

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the data,

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grils

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girls

show

deeply

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deep

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interests

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interest

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the

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apply

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netball

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in over

the

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one fourth

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, there is a

little

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small

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number of

boys

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spend

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who spend

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time in

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apply

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netball

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in almost

noun

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every noun

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. A large number of

boys

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prefer to play soccer

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that

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which

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with

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the highest

percentsge

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percentage

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apply

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almost 25%. Swimming

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also

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is also

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the

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apply

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popular

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among

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grils

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girls

, but the proportion is

lowe

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lower

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than

netball

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around 23%. The other is in the same situation across the

boys

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, it is in the significant proportion in the whole

sports

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types. And

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grils

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girls

hardly ever to chose

the

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apply

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cricket.

Baketball

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Basketball

and tennis are in the nearly percentage in both

gender

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genders

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from 5% to 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, boys, grils, netball with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
41
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

187 words

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