Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
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are limited: as a result
, some individuals say that the
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government
investments should be only in scientific reseaches
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rather
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government's
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focus
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this
will improve education
level , and later on these researches
will develop their lives.
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financial support
provided for post garduate
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graduate
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by the government
has a huge effet
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effect
in
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education
levels and sciences improve, their lives' quality
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countries,
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for scientific
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