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The charts below show the favorite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the favorite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
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 shows which type of takeaway food is the most popular in Canada,
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 the bar
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 shows how many
Indian
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 restaurants existed in Canada between 1960 and 2015. We can see that Chinese and
Indian
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 takeaways are the favourites
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 and that the number of
Indian
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 restaurants in Canada rose steadily during
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 period. The pie
chart
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 shows that Chinese and
Indian
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 takeaways are much more popular than all the others, at 34% and 26%. There are another two types that quite a lot of people like. These are Italian at 10% and Persian at 9%. Greek, Japanese and Mexican were only chosen by 1% of people. The pie
chart
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 shows us that
Indian
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 food is popular and the bar
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 shows how its popularity grew. There was a rising trend from 1960 onwards. The increase was greatest in the 1990s, from about 5000 restaurants in 1990 to almost 8000 in 2000. Since 2007, the number has remained stable at just over 9000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, indian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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