The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the percentages in three

type

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types

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of nutrients namely sodium, saturated fat and added sugars that can

been

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seen in our usual meals. As we can see, during dinner, most people enjoyed salty foods with 43% rates,

whereas

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the others

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others

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two components

not

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were not

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less than 23% in

figure

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the figure

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However

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, when it comes to snack time, many

prefered

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preferred

sweet foods with a number of 42%,

following

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by whole number with 35% in both other nutritions. Next is breakfast, similar digits can be seen in added sugars and oily cooks with 16% but higher

unit

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than sodium intakes.

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natrium

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atrium

chemical is added

while

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having lunch marked 29% compared to fat and sugar, 26% and 19%, respectively.

Overall

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, those three

kind

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of nutrients are unhealthy to a person's health if continued to consume daily which will lead to

disease

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diseases

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such

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obesity

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as obesity

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and heart illness.

tifjong

Jul 17, 2024

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

145 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average percentage
nutrients
sodium
saturated fat
added sugars
typical meals
breakfast
lunch
dinner
snacks
consumption
excess
health implications
comparison
trend
pattern

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eating too much. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? ive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own nowledge or experience.